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Tuesday 26 May 2015

Get ready for winter Pt England Students

WALT:write a news style report


                                Get ready for winter Pt England Students
                                          25.05.15

Winter is on its way, 6 more days people. Get ready for the coldest season of the year. Students at Pt England school are thinking of having no school on stormy rainy days.


6 more days until winter is here. Winter is the coldest season of the year. Winter in Auckland is very cold, but we have no snow. Auckland’s winter is very stormy, foggy, frosty, thundery and more. Sometimes its even hailing. Kids getting the flu, getting sick. Extra raincoats and layers of clothes can keep you warmer for this winter.


Pt England students are complaining about having to come to school in the rain. Glen Innes resident saying to her children “ You are going to school no matter what” her children saying “ Why do we have to walk in the rain?”. Having to walk in the rain, having wet shoes, socks and clothes. Pt England students are affected by the weather because they have to walk to school. Sometimes they have no shoes which makes it worst for them, they could get the flu.


Lani a Pt England student thinks that they should not come to school on a rainy day but take their chromebooks home to learn. Another Pt England student thinks that school should be closed on a rainy day. But Yvonne (pes student) thinks that they should come to school on a rainy day Talita also a pes student thinks “why should we stay home”, “I’d rather learn”. Presayus (student) has some tips for coming to school on a rainy day. Her tips are to bring extra clothes, wear a raincoat, bring an umbrella or just catch a ride.   

Task Description:The task was to write a New Report about Winter. We had to write a lead paragraph 2 supporting paragraphs and one interview paragraph. Her is my writing.  







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